Rewording, sentence building and the use of comment balloons for feedback Below is a student example based on the Stage 5 History topic Gallipoli and information obtained from the Australian War Memorial site ‘Encyclop - Battle of Lone Pine - Document - PDFSEARCH.IO

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	Rewording, sentence building and the use of comment balloons for feedback Below is a student example based on the Stage 5 History topic Gallipoli and information obtained from the Australian War Memorial site ‘Encyclop Add to Reading List Document Date: 2010-04-21 19:00:20 Open Document File Size: 34,50 KB Share Result on Facebook Company Microsoft / Lone Pine / / Country Australia / Egypt / United Kingdom / France / New Zealand / / Facility Australian War Memorial / Chifley College Bidwill Campus / / NaturalFeature Gallipoli Peninsula / / Organization Australian Imperial Force / Department of Education / British navy / School Libraries and Information Literacy Unit / / Position Teacher / Governor / / URL http / SocialTag Dardanelles Gallipoli Çanakkale Yes and no Word While Battle of Lone Pine Linguistics English words Gallipoli Campaign

Rewording, sentence building and the use of comment balloons for feedback Below is a student example based on the Stage 5 History topic Gallipoli and information obtained from the Australian War Memorial site ‘EncyclopAdd to Reading List